How to write Show, don't Tell scenes - Informative writing
TELL: Bears stand at the tops of waterfalls and catch the salmon leaping upstream.
SHOW: The bear stands at the top of the waterfall, his eyes watching a flash of silver in the pool below. It is a female salmon, struggling to reach upstream to lay her eggs. She has swum for two days now, heavy with eggs and she is exhausted, but this is the last waterfall. She swims below, gathering her strength for the last great leap she will need. The bear waits patiently. He can afford to be patient, he is standing at the shortest part of the waterfall, he knows where the fish will come...
